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Post by James McFadyen on Jan 6, 2007 17:58:31 GMT
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Post by jjm on Jan 6, 2007 23:14:12 GMT
Nice site, but check the grammar on the biography. The first sentence reads "Born in Salford at a very early age <comma>Darrol joined the scool band...". I immediately said to myself "weren't we all born at a very early age". Perhaps a comma or fullstop would remove any ambiguity
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Post by Naomi McFadyen on Jan 7, 2007 9:48:18 GMT
Hi John. The wording of the Biography (and everything else for that) is what I was given by the Barry's. It was also on their old website. I mentioned to them about the "born at a young age" thing ages ago with the same comments as you.... it's just a laugh and a joke and they are happy with the way it is ;D (and at least 'school' was spelt correctly  hehe) Glad you like the site though. The feedback that the Barry's have had from people has been excellent. |
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